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Chapter 7 – Like An Ant

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–Inside A Forest Roughly 20 Miles From The Capital–

A man wearing brown leather armor sat on top of a small boulder. Next to him, stood a woman with black hair tied into a ponytail. This girl was the Class Representative.

Before them were the rest of her classmates, excluding Alek.

She clears her throat before starting her announcement.

(“Its been almost a month since we’ve received the report about the attack on the capital which lead to the King and the Prince’s grave injuries. In about a day or two, we’ll arrive at the capital as support”.) -Class Rep.

Some of the students started murmuring to each other when suddenly the armored man, Dean, stood up. He had dyed, blonde hair and an earring on his left ear; the perfect poster boy for being a playboy.

(“Now, now, calm down. We’re just going back to help with moving the debris n’ stuff. ‘kay!?”, he said with a dismissive tone.) -Dean

Soon, the murmurs died down and the students dispersed; leaving the Class Rep. and Dean to themselves.

(“Hey, Class Rep., what do you think happened back at the capital anyway?”) -Dean

She shrugs nonchalantly and looks at the knights who were ordered to help them, but only when they truly needed it.

(“The knights haven’t told me anything. Just kept saying it was some sort of monster…”) -Class Rep.

(“Well, I guess we’ll find out soon enough…”) -Dean

Just as they were about to go, rushed footsteps and a sudden shout caught their attention.

(“Class Rep! Class rep! Problem!”, yelled the random student as he got closer.) -Random Student

She turns her head to look at the incoming student and notices a number of scratches on his thick, woolen robe.

(“Whats wrong? Did something happen?”, she asked with stern authority in her voice.) -Class Rep.

(“The knights! *huff*.. They-…*huff*.. They’re in trouble!”, he managed to say as he caught his breath.) -Random Student

Dean and the Class Rep. looked at each other before nodding once. The Class Rep. took a step forward.

(“Lead the way!”) -Class Rep.

————-Yes, I’m A Dividing Line. Hello.————-

As they ran towards the direction of the knights, the sound of battle rung through the air accompanied by the sound of a child’s laughter.

When they reached the clearing, the scene presented truly shocked them with awe.

In the middle of the clearing stood a boy. He had red, spiky hair, was wearing a black cloak, and on his fists were red metallic gauntlets with spikes placed on the area where the knuckles could be found. What shocked them though, were all the high level knights, who were lent to them by the king as guardians, surrounding him and beaten to a pulp on the floor.

Their armors were dented, swords in pieces, and shields broken. Some were even knocked out while others were simply lying on the ground while letting out pained moans.

Only one knight was left standing. A level 70 Knight Captain; one of the kings most trusted knights. He swung his sword aiming towards the child’s head. His attack was so fast that even we, with our heightened senses, could only see it as nothing but a blur.

(“Martial skill: Crescent swing!”, the Knight Captain yelled as he brought his blade down.) -Knight Captain

His sword was suddenly covered in red energy which increased the speed of his swing to the point that we couldn’t even see the sword as it sliced through the air. I instinctively closed my eyes; anticipating the inevitable death of his young opponent.

*CLANG!*

The sound of metal hitting metal reverberated through the forest just as I had closed my eyes.

‘Eh? The kid managed to parry his swing!? What amazing speed!’ -Class Rep.

But, as soon as I opened my eyes, I realized just how much I had underestimated the child.

Before me was the young boy with spiky, red hair; his left hand covering his mouth as he yawned while his right hand was raised in the air, holding the Knight Captain’s sword between his index and middle finger like it was a mere toothpick.

(“M-Monster!”, he exclaimed in fear.) -Knight Captain

(“Huh? That was it? So much for the Captain la~”) -Spiky Hair

He flicked his arm and sent the Knight Captain flying towards a tree, knocking him out.

The child tilted his head, staring at the two who had just arrived.

(“Ooh~ More people!”, he said in a jovial tone.”) -Spiky Hair

(“You.”, he said as he pointed his gauntlet at Dean. “You look stronger than those pesky knights; fight me!”) -Spiky hair

(“Ha? You wanna fight me!? Hmph! Suit yourself!”) -Dean

This idiot! -Class Rep.

I quickly grab him by the shoulder and pull him back.

(“Oi! Are you brain-dead!? Don’t you notice anything strange about him?”) -Class Rep

(“I know, I know! He beat the knights, but I can beat the knights too! Trust me. Even though I’m at a lower level than the knights, I could still win.”) -Dean

(“It’s not that you idiot! Look at him and concentrate! You can’t see his level at all! Not just that; even his name and title can’t be seen by using ‘identify‘!”) -Class rep

As the two of us whispered to each other. the spiky hair child suddenly clicked his tongue.

(“Tch. What, you ain’t comin’? Well… If you’re not gonna go first, then I will!) -Spiky hair

As soon as he finished, he suddenly dashed towards us… No it wouldn’t do it justice if I called it as just a ‘dash‘.

It was more like he teleported in front of us; he was that fast.

He pulled his right hand back before sending a punch towards Deans face.

Even though I was right next to him, I couldn’t do anything about the incoming attack. Even dean couldn’t react fast enough to dodge it and he has the highest level in our whole class!

I closed my eyes and so did Dean, bracing for impact…

(“Asura, that’s enough.”) -???

Suddenly, a cold and emotionless voice echoed through the forest.

As I slowly open my eyes, I see the red gauntlet inches away from Deans face. Dean on the other hand was sweating all over, his breathing rough.

(“Tch… you got lucky.”) -Asura

As I raise my head to look at the origin of the voice, I see seven hooded figures standing on top of different tree branches. They were all wearing black cloaks that hid even their feet. A very tall one; a short, but wide one; and four others with average height. The last of the group, however, had his hood lowered; showing his entire face. It was Alek, the classmate we deemed unneeded. Why was he with them!?

(“Come, we need to go.”) -Alek

The spiky, red haired boy, Asura, nods his head and jumps towards one of the branches before covering half of his face with his own hood.

(“Arcana : Mirage”) -Female Voice

One of the people in the hooded group suddenly casts a spell and all eight of them start to become transparent and fade from vision.

From the start of the spell until they were completely invisible, Alek stared at me with emotionless eyes. As if he were merely looking at an ant…

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Character Art

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Just wanted to put this out before starting on chap 7

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Chapter 6 – Master

Hey there im back(?) sorta. Exams coming around the corner again but after october its spring break so.. yay?


Darkness..

The whole room was covered in this eerie layer of darkness that made you feel depressed just by looking at it.

I turn my head towards the right and i could see my son next to me with the same confused look i probably have.

He was shaking in fear at the sudden turn of events

I waved my hand in the air and cast a light spell

(Guide me, wisp!) King

A small ball of light materializes above my hand but the strange thing was that it didn’t help with the situation at all.

I couldnt see the marble floor even though I placed the orb of light near my feet.

(Hey Hey I can materialize again!) ???

(Yeah me too! Alek must be in trouble huh~ Its been so long since hes needed us) ???

I heard two voices echoing in the darkness, the first one belonged to a child and the other one sounded like a womans voice.

(Ara ara.. will ye shut yer traps for a sec! There are other people inside the room!) ???

(Ahh yeah… I guess you’re right) ???

More voices echoed through the room, A rough sounding male voice talked with the female voice from awhile ago

(Oh hes moving..) ???

The female voice said as I hear footsteps heading towards me

(Your majesty..) Alek

Ah.. it was the young hero… Can he see through this darkness?

As the footsteps get closer i begin to see his outline in the darkness.. but something seems strange about him.

A while ago he seemed so full of life, excited to roam our world. But now he looks more like one of the automated maid golems that roam the castle grounds to do small tasks like cleaning.

(Ah.. young hero… something strange is going on.. this darkness is unnatural.. perhaps an attack from the demon king? It seems we have to postpone your trial..) King

I raise my hand and insert more mana into the orb of light, making it as large as an average human child.

As I do this the hero shows a troubled face as he looks at me.

(Ah.. Do not worry young hero I can sustain something like this for days without rest. Although im a king I used to be quite the mage if I do say so myself ..hoho) king

I try my best to hide the fact that I too am nervous, as i try to calm the nervous hero. Someone as young as this child would certainly be afraid of sudden situations like this

(And it seems there are atleast three intruders in the throne room.. Ezikiel hand me my staff) king

My son that was beside me hands over a golden staff with a large red gem on the very tip of it.

(Show your selves!) King

I raise my staff as a ball of fire shoots from the red gem, heading for the direction of the voices from awhile ago.

I squint my eyes as i prepare for an explosion from either hitting the intruders or  possibly the wall behind them..

I waited for a few seconds but nothing happened, it was as if the fireball never existed.

(Ah.. Right sorry. I still had it switched on..) Alek

The young hero suddenly spoke as he raises his hand and does a swiping movement with it.

Suddenly the darkness disappears and the scenery around be goes back to the throne room.

(W-What.. You did that!? How dare you!) Prince

As soon as he realized what happened my son raised his hand to shoot a fireball at the young hero simply because he was showed his weak side.. haa… Although it is weak compared to mine it will still deal some damage when hit directly. Haa… I supposed i’ll have to give a formal apology later on.. so troublesome..

(What do you think your doing ha!?) ???

A voice suddenly shouted out near me, then I recalled the issue about intruders! As I turn my head i see a tall man about 6’5 with blond hair reaching to his elbows covering a small portion of his pointy ears… An elf? Why would an elf attack us? We had an agreement!

Before I could shout with anger a voice which sounded cold and uncaring suddenly spoke

(Stop.)

The voice came from the person infront of me, the young hero Alek.

(B-But Master! He was about t-) Elf

(Silence. Did I tell you to do that?) Alek

(A-Ah… Understood…) Elf

The tall elf bowed his head quickly before disappearing infront of me and appearing inbetween 6 more people at the back of the throne room.

From the left it was a small child with Red spiky hair, On his fists were what looked like metal gauntlets with spikes at the kuckle area, his eyes were filled with fighting spirit and his overall posture told me that he was a fighter.

Next to him is a dark elf woman with silver hair reaching down to her knees. She had two curved swords strapped at her back while wearing somekind of leathery scale armor which was the same color as her skin.

Then next to the dark elf was a man with short stature but with a good build.A dwarf.. how rare.. A bushy black beard extended towards the short mans knees.  A few daggers were strapped to his right leg while a large war hammer was being held upright by the dwarf.

Next to the dwarf was a handsome looking man with short blond hair. He wore a shining white armor and held a similarly shining white kite shield on his left hand while a blade of light was at his right. A hero. That was the word that first came into mind when i saw him. He looked exactly what fairy tales would describe a hero. Handsome, dependable looking and was strong. Behind him were two women, one wore a Nun like outfit made out of expensive looking cloth while wielding a staff that seeped out a holy aura. The woman next to her was an elf with blonde hair tied into a pony tail holding a magnificent bow that was made out of bluish grey metal adorned by multiple gems.

I stood there with my mouth hanging open as i looked at the last three people in the group. HEROES! my heart screamed out. A powerful group of adventurers equipped with unbelievably strong weapons and armor. They looked exactly how i imagined heroes would look like

The three of them could easily defeat the demon lord!

I was filled with joy , no longer will we be terrorized by the demon king and his army, a large grin was on my face as i imagined a scenario of the three heroes return after defeating he demon king, and the military power my kingdom would have afterwards.

I was in heaven, just by seeing these three I saw hope in our dire situation. But that hope did not last long as it was completely shattered by what happened next.

(Master! Please give us an order!)

The whole group which consisted of ‘monsters’ lowered their heads and bowed as if they were worshiping a God. Seeing these strong individuals bow their heads was very surreal..

Their lowered heads were all directed in one direction. To us.. more precisely to the young hero Alek..

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Chapter 6 – Master

Hey there im back(?) sorta. Exams coming around the corner again but after october its spring break so.. yay?


Darkness..

The whole room was covered in this eerie layer of darkness that made you feel depressed just by looking at it.

I turn my head towards the right and i could see my son next to me with the same confused look i probably have.

He was shaking in fear at the sudden turn of events

I waved my hand in the air and cast a light spell

(Guide me, wisp!) King

A small ball of light materializes above my hand but the strange thing was that it didn’t help with the situation at all.

I couldnt see the marble floor even though I placed the orb of light near my feet.

(Hey Hey I can materialize again!) ???

(Yeah me too! Alek must be in trouble huh~ Its been so long since hes needed us) ???

I heard two voices echoing in the darkness, the first one belonged to a child and the other one sounded like a womans voice.

(Ara ara.. will ye shut yer traps for a sec! There are other people inside the room!) ???

(Ahh yeah… I guess you’re right) ???

More voices echoed through the room, A rough sounding male voice talked with the female voice from awhile ago

(Oh hes moving..) ???

The female voice said as I hear footsteps heading towards me

(Your majesty..) Alek

Ah.. it was the young hero… Can he see through this darkness?

As the footsteps get closer i begin to see his outline in the darkness.. but something seems strange about him.

A while ago he seemed so full of life, excited to roam our world. But now he looks more like one of the automated maid golems that roam the castle grounds to do small tasks like cleaning.

(Ah.. young hero… something strange is going on.. this darkness is unnatural.. perhaps an attack from the demon king? It seems we have to postpone your trial..) King

I raise my hand and insert more mana into the orb of light, making it as large as an average human child.

As I do this the hero shows a troubled face as he looks at me.

(Ah.. Do not worry young hero I can sustain something like this for days without rest. Although im a king I used to be quite the mage if I do say so myself ..hoho) king

I try my best to hide the fact that I too am nervous, as i try to calm the nervous hero. Someone as young as this child would certainly be afraid of sudden situations like this

(And it seems there are atleast three intruders in the throne room.. Ezikiel hand me my staff) king

My son that was beside me hands over a golden staff with a large red gem on the very tip of it.

(Show your selves!) King

I raise my staff as a ball of fire shoots from the red gem, heading for the direction of the voices from awhile ago.

I squint my eyes as i prepare for an explosion from either hitting the intruders or  possibly the wall behind them..

I waited for a few seconds but nothing happened, it was as if the fireball never existed.

(Ah.. Right sorry. I still had it switched on..) Alek

The young hero suddenly spoke as he raises his hand and does a swiping movement with it.

Suddenly the darkness disappears and the scenery around be goes back to the throne room.

(W-What.. You did that!? How dare you!) Prince

As soon as he realized what happened my son raised his hand to shoot a fireball at the young hero simply because he was showed his weak side.. haa… Although it is weak compared to mine it will still deal some damage when hit directly. Haa… I supposed i’ll have to give a formal apology later on.. so troublesome..

(What do you think your doing ha!?) ???

A voice suddenly shouted out near me, then I recalled the issue about intruders! As I turn my head i see a tall man about 6’5 with blond hair reaching to his elbows covering a small portion of his pointy ears… An elf? Why would an elf attack us? We had an agreement!

Before I could shout with anger a voice which sounded cold and uncaring suddenly spoke

(Stop.)

The voice came from the person infront of me, the young hero Alek.

(B-But Master! He was about t-) Elf

(Silence. Did I tell you to do that?) Alek

(A-Ah… Understood…) Elf

The tall elf bowed his head quickly before disappearing infront of me and appearing inbetween 6 more people at the back of the throne room.

From the left it was a small child with Red spiky hair, On his fists were what looked like metal gauntlets with spikes at the kuckle area, his eyes were filled with fighting spirit and his overall posture told me that he was a fighter.

Next to him is a dark elf woman with silver hair reaching down to her knees. She had two curved swords strapped at her back while wearing somekind of leathery scale armor which was the same color as her skin.

Then next to the dark elf was a man with short stature but with a good build.A dwarf.. how rare.. A bushy black beard extended towards the short mans knees.  A few daggers were strapped to his right leg while a large war hammer was being held upright by the dwarf.

Next to the dwarf was a handsome looking man with short blond hair. He wore a shining white armor and held a similarly shining white kite shield on his left hand while a blade of light was at his right. A hero. That was the word that first came into mind when i saw him. He looked exactly what fairy tales would describe a hero. Handsome, dependable looking and was strong. Behind him were two women, one wore a Nun like outfit made out of expensive looking cloth while wielding a staff that seeped out a holy aura. The woman next to her was an elf with blonde hair tied into a pony tail holding a magnificent bow that was made out of bluish grey metal adorned by multiple gems.

I stood there with my mouth hanging open as i looked at the last three people in the group. HEROES! my heart screamed out. A powerful group of adventurers equipped with unbelievably strong weapons and armor. They looked exactly how i imagined heroes would look like

The three of them could easily defeat the demon lord!

I was filled with joy , no longer will we be terrorized by the demon king and his army, a large grin was on my face as i imagined a scenario of the three heroes return after defeating he demon king, and the military power my kingdom would have afterwards.

I was in heaven, just by seeing these three I saw hope in our dire situation. But that hope did not last long as it was completely shattered by what happened next.

(Master! Please give us an order!)

The whole group which consisted of ‘monsters’ lowered their heads and bowed as if they were worshiping a God. Seeing these strong individuals bow their heads was very surreal..

Their lowered heads were all directed in one direction. To us.. more precisely to the young hero Alek..

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Chapter 6 (preview)

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Not A Chapter – I created my own country

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The Dictatorship of Red Stash is a fledgling, orderly nation, remarkable for its irreverence towards religion, restrictive gun laws, and complete absence of social welfare. The hard-nosed, hard-working, cynical population of 6 million Red Stashians are ruled with an iron fist by the corrupt, dictatorship government, which oppresses anyone who isn’t on the board of a Fortune 500 company. Large corporations tend to be above the law, and use their financial clout to gain ever-increasing government benefits at the expense of the poor and unemployed.

The relatively small, moralistic, pro-business, well-organized government juggles the competing demands of Law & Order, Defense, and Industry. Citizens pay a flat income tax of 15.0%.

The thriving Red Stashian economy, worth 370 billion Del bit a year, is broadly diversified and dominated by the Arms Manufacturing industry, with significant contributions from Woodchip Exports, Pizza Delivery, and Gambling. Average income is 61,678 Del bit, but there is a large disparity between incomes, with the richest 10% of citizens earning 237,143 per year while the poor average 11,046, a ratio of 21.5 to 1.

Voting is compulsory, military spending is on the increase, the police force is on a recruitment drive, and employers may fire workers without giving any reason. Crime, especially youth-related, is well under control, thanks to a well-funded police force. Red Stash’s national animal is the Red bellied penguin, which can occasionally be seen sifting through garbage in the nation’s cities.

Red Stash is ranked 553rd in Taijitu and 124,750th in the world for Most Politically Free, scoring 0 on the Diebold Election Inking Scale.

http://www.nationstates.net/nation=red_stash

No chapter yet but if you ever wondered what would happen if i ruled a nation, well now you know

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